Monday 28 March 2011

Essay - First draft - with notes from Richard

This is my essay handed in on 14/02/11.
These are the notes to which I need to respond to in my revised draft. 











Things I need to address...
  • My conversational tone of voice
  • Harvard Referencing
  • Analysing my quotes better
  • Shorter quotes
  • More sources

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